学生原文 5 工程师
If you love to design new buildings and draw pictures, engineer is a befitting job for you. As a designer of buildings, you can't only draw a house, but also need to care about its height, wideness, the number of floors and so on. Then you must write all the data and details on the paper. You should have a creative heart and different ideas so that more people can be attracted by the buildings you have designed. Engineer is also my favorite job, I think this work will enrich my imagination and these successful buildings make me feel proud. So come on to have a try.
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If you love to design new buildings and draw pictures, engineer is suitable for you. As a designer of buildings, when you draw the plans of houses, you need to care about its height, width, the number of floors and so on. Then you must take all of them into account. Besides, a good designer should have a creative mind and different ideas/should be creative and full of different ideas so that more people can be attracted by the buildings you have designed. Engineer is also my favorite job, I think this work will enrich my imagination and make me feel proud of my successful buildings. So come on to have a try. /Why not have a try.
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