第一篇：
【写作要求】
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括：
1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄翻译上述原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.……
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My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
得分亮点解析：
1.比较级 比较级，……越来越……
worse and worse越来越坏，越来越严重
more and more beautiful 越来越漂亮，越来越美丽
2.大量运用被动语态：主语 be 过去分词
3.
wish sb to do sth 希望某人做某事
He was not sure whether he wished her to stay or go.
他说不准他到底是希望她留下还是离开。
make full use of充分利用
4. 篇幅：
Firstly, ……Secondly, ……Thirdly,……首先……，其次……，第三，……使文章有层次感，思路清晰
5.译文：
我的低碳生活
今天环境污染越来越严重。许多树木被砍伐，水和空气被污染。作为一名学生，我努力过低碳生活，以节约能源和减少污染。
首先，我经常步行上学。它可以减少空气污染。第二，我离开教室时总是关上灯和风扇。第三，我总是充分利用纸张和其他学校用品，从不浪费水。
我希望更多的学生加入我的行列，让地球变得越来越美丽。
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want \wish\hope用法分析
1. wish 与 want 虽意思相近，但用法不同。want 表示感觉需要或希望拥有某物，可以说 want to do something, want someone to do something 或 want something to happen。如果 wish 与带 to 的不定式连用，则与 want 意思相同，但语气要更正式：
I want to get out of here (我想离开这里),
She wished to consult him about her future (她想就自己未来的发展向他咨询意见)。
wish 一般后接 that 从句，但从句中的 that 经常省略，表示虽然明知不太可能或完全没有可能，依然希望某事是真的：
I wish I lived near London (我真希望自己住在伦敦附近)，
He wished he had phoned for a cab (他真希望自己已经打电话叫出租车了)。
注意上述例子中时态的用法：wish 用现在时，则从句用过去时;wish 用过去时，则从句用过去完成时。
I wish it weren't true
但愿这不是真的。
I wish you would come back to Washington with us, but that's for you to decide
我希望你能和我们一起回华盛顿，但是这由你决定。
When we're together, all he talks about is business. I wish he were more romantic
我们在一起的时候，他总是谈论生意。我希望他能更浪漫一点。
2. wish v. 希望，多用于与事实相反的情况，尤用于难于实现或不可能实现的愿望。wish后可接复合宾语；
I wish I were as young as you.我要是像你们那么年轻该多好啊！
I wish (that) I had met that good teacher 10 years ago.我要是10年前遇到那么好的老师就好了。
It was no use wishing for a miracle.只是盼望出现奇迹没什么用。
在更正式的英语，尤其是北美英语中，许多人在I、he、she、it之后用were，而不用was：
I wish he were here tonight.要是他今晚在这儿就好了。
I wish him to make progress．希望他取得进步。
表示祝福：
I wish you happy．祝你幸福.（不用hope）
I wish you a pleasant journey．祝你旅途愉快.（不用hope）
I wish you both a very good journey
我祝愿你们两人旅途愉快。
3.
hope v. 希望，期望指盼望得到好的或有利的结果，并对此持有一定的信心。hope用作不及物动词时常接of, for引起的短语。
I hope to become a useful man.我希望成为一个有用的人。
We hope that we can visit the United States this year.我们希望年内能访问美国。
Everyone hopes for success.每个人都希望成功。
I do hope you'll forgive me but I've got to leave.
我真的非常抱歉，我得走了。
区别小结：
（1）wish 宾 to 动词原形表示命令,hope无此用法 。
（2）hope后不能直接跟名词作宾语,可跟for 名词,表示可实现的“希望”,wish虽也跟for 名词,但表示难实现的“愿望”。
（3）hope和wish可跟that从句,但hope that表示希望 。wish that表示“愿望”,且从句动词用虚拟语气。
(4)wish可跟双宾语。
wish例句
I wish him to make progress．
希望他取得进步。
I wish (that) I had met that good teacher 10 years ago.
我要是10年前遇到那么好的老师就好了。
I wish I were as young as you.
我要是像你们那么年轻该多好啊！
I wish you wouldn't leave your clothes all over the floor.
我真希望你不把衣服丢得满地都是。
I wish I hadn't eaten so much.
我倒希望我没有吃这么多。
wish I were taller.
我要是个子高一些就好了。
I wish to hear the details of your adventure.
我希望听到你这次奇遇的详情。
I wish he would stop crowing about his examination results.
我多么希望他不再吹嘘他的考试成绩。
His wish to study music has come true at last.
他学习音乐的愿望这回算实现了。
If you wish to go away for the weekend, our office will be delighted to make hotel reservations...
如果您想外出度周末，我们办事处将很乐意为您预订旅馆。
I don't wish (= I don't mean) to be rude, but could you be a little quieter?
我不想无礼，但请您安静一点儿好吗？
He was not sure whether he wished her to stay or go.
他说不准他到底是希望她留下还是离开。
hope例句
I hope (that) you're okay.
我希望你平安无事。
Let's hope we can find a parking space.
希望咱们能找到个停车位。
I hope you don't mind me coming to see you...
希望你不介意我来见你。
I had high hopes that Derek Randall might play an important part
我对德里克·兰德尔发挥重要作用寄予厚望。
We hope this objective will be attained.
我们希望这个目标能够达到。
It is hoped that over £10 000 will be raised.
希望筹款能超过1万英镑。
We hope for a lasting settlement of all these troubles.
我们希望这些纠纷能获得永久的解决。
We are hoping for good weather on Sunday.
我们盼望着星期天天气好。
We hope to arrive around two.
我们希望能在两点钟左右到达。
I hope to get a job within the next two weeks
我希望能在未来两周内找到一份工作。
She is hoping to win the gold medal.
她希望赢得金牌。
I took the risk and hoped for the best.
我冒了这个险，心里祈祷能够诸事顺利。
I hope to become a useful man.
我希望成为一个有用的人。
We hope that we can visit the United States this year.
我们希望年内能访问美国。
Everyone hopes for success.
每个人都希望成功。
hope可用于以下形式的被动句：it is hoped that ...。
其他被动句中hope必须与for连用：The improvement that had been hoped for never came. / The hoped-for improvement never came.
