短文改错。只允许改10处。
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how too preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove. I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way ,”my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.
本文作者在妈妈的指导下,详细介绍了自己做番茄炒鸡蛋这道菜的制作过程。
1、simply →simple. a adj n“ 冠词 形容词 名词”是英语重要的一种表达结构,冠词和名词中间要用形容词。
2、frying →fried .考察非谓语动词。非谓语动词的黄金规则是:现在分词表主动表进行;过去分词表被动表完成;动词不定式表将来。“我喜欢吃番茄炒蛋”tomatoes with eggs 与动词fry 是被动关系,所以用过去分词。
3去掉to. must 是情态动词,情态动词后跟动词原形。
4、preparing →prepare. 观察句子结构:how to do it. 英语中可以用“连词 动词不定式”相当于“连词 句子”。这种转换的前提是:前后两句子主语一致。
5、but →and. 前后两动作是并列关系,而并非转折,“首先把番茄切片,然后放在一边”。
6、chopstick →chopsticks. 名词如果出错,多数就是单复数问题、所有格问题。本句用“筷子迅速搅拌”,应该是复数。
7、off →on. 考察短语意思。turn on 打开;turn off 关掉;turn up 音量调大、出现;turn down 音量调小、拒绝。
8、unless →until /till. 考察连词。unless 如果不、除非; until /till 直到。“我耐心地等待油锅热”。
9、pan 前加the. 单数可数名词在英语中不能单独用,大家要注意这一重要规则,需要加修饰语:冠词、代词、数词等。
10、us →me. 本文就作者自己,不能用“我们”,用“我”。
大家要特别注意连词出现的地方,连词是分析句子结构的重要依据,特别有and 、but 出现的句子,往往前后关系弄错。
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